
Update on my college personal essay 45 years later.
I wrote about running away from home.
Then, I had to go to college as a runaway!
so, after “reveling in misery under the overhang of a roof at a Grand Union” I was completely lost on a nearby highway and took a ride from a man in a tan van. He whipped it out and said “Play with it.”
I escaped wirhout being raped and killed. I didn’t put this in the essay.
the “minions of man and nature” at the NY Port Authority included a large Black woman who let me sit beside her all night long, a couple of street kids, and a pimp who engaged me in conversation for about 15 minutes before I was able to get to safety on the bus back to my high school in Connecticut.
i didn’t put any of this in my essay. It read like a simple and sweet allegorical tale, much like Samuel Johnson’s “Rasselas” which I referenced or like Ecclesiastes which I didn’t know to.
a lot of fancy words by a struggling young woman. So, I sort of lied a bit about extracurriculars. But not about my SATs. 750 750.
well, I didn’t strictly lie but the information that I provided wss misleading.
Then, something happened at home over the Christmas holidays after I sent off all those lovely and beautiful applications. It galvanized me to go to Harvard as I did, sort of as a runaway.
And here I am today.
stopping to take a breath and look around me.
all I know is that I have a kid whom I love and adore. And that through this I found Jesus.
This is my witness.


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